English / Year 4 / Literacy / Creating texts

Curriculum content descriptions

Re-read and edit for meaning by adding, deleting or moving words or word groups to improve content and structure (ACELY1695)

Elaborations
  • revising written texts: editing for grammatical and spelling accuracy and clarity of the text, to improve the connection between ideas and the overall flow of the piece
General capabilities
  • Literacy Literacy
  • Critical and creative thinking Critical and creative thinking
ScOT terms

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